I like the new "spicy" intro. (1) At this stage, my only comment (as someone who worked on research sent to institutional investors, IPO reports, etc.) would be to try and keep the acronyms consistent throughout. LibreSoC (not LibreSOC) GPU (not gpu). And to continue being focussed on the benefits. And perhaps, at some time, So, I rather like this intro: We're building a chip. A fast chip. A safe chip. A trusted chip. A chip with lots of peripherals. And a GPU. And an AI accelerator... Oh and here, have the Source Code... NICE! (2) I would have someone reorganize this page a bit and make it match more in rhythm with the "Fast, Safe, Trusted" theme. Oh...and about https://libre-riscv.org/why_a_libresoc/ And this page, too. https://libre-riscv.org/About_Us/ Have each section reinforce the theme of Fast, Safe & Trusted. (3) And somewhere...if possible, maybe spell out more clearly WHY the LibreSoC is going to save manufacturers a lot of money. In the Mission Statement...it says: give mass volume appliance manufacturers an alternative to expensive un-auditable chips (4) Which brings me to a suggested NEW Mission Statement, along these lines: "We are bringing the world an alternative chip that is Fast, Safe, and Trusted. We give manufacturers the freedom to be able to fully audit their products from the processor on up, enabling them to create secure, reliable and "just as we designed it" experiences for their customers." I offer this Mission Statement to perhaps spark you guys into thinking of something catchier for that particular page. Once you get the Mission Statement down...then the rest of the page will follow. Warmly, Marie (✿◕‿◕)